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final final edits on shooting star + epilogue

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"Yes, I think so," I replied, a hunger already building within me. "At least if you do get pregnant, you can let me finish inside you like that again." "Yes, I think so," I replied, a hunger already building within me. "At least if you do get pregnant, you can let me finish inside you like that again."
She smiled naughtily. "Well, we'll just have to see about that." She smiled naughtily. "Well, if we're lucky, then... we'll just have to see about that."
I nodded, still grappling with everything that had just happened. "That was incredible.
She took
But Elise was finally settled on the ground, her eyes locked on mine. "I want you to tell me if I'm doing a good job, Peter. I haven't ever given a blowjob before, and your cock is so big I'm worried I'll have trouble fitting it."
I laughed lightly, letting my hand run along her neck, which elicted a shiver and a slow blink. "Just don't use your teeth and I'm sure you'll do great."
She nodded seriously, then slow
She moaned, sliding my cock between her breasts again. It felt incredible, better than I'd ever felt before, but I somehow held on, my cock twitching and spurting drops of precum all over her perfect, smooth breasts. She looked at me with those beautiful, begging eyes and whispered down to me. "Can I rub you between my legs baby? I think I could cum again, just from that, feeling your cock down there like when I touch myself..."
I nodded, slowly, taking a shuddering breath. "You can baby but you should be careful, shouldn't you? Is it safe to do that? It's feeling so good already for me, I worry it might make me cum too, and my precum is all over my cock."
She smiled. "Of course it's safe baby." She pressed her tits back down to my erect cock, smothering them and eliciting another wave of pleasure that surged through me, and then she proceeded to inch her way up my body, pressing my slippery, messy cock between her and me the whole way, until she came to a rest with a desperate moan atop my cock like she was grinding on a pillow. She stabilized herself, then started a few slow circular gyrations with her hips.
It was like being jerked off by a tsunami. Every pleasure sensor in my cock seemed to be going, and my breath became ragged. "Babe, you're gonna make me cum," I whispered, but suddenly she lifted off me, the pleasure temporarily subsiding, and her own orgasm from grinding on me took her. She tumbled backwards onto the bed, body shaking, moaning and covered in my precum. I shifted to the side of the bed and slid a finger up her thighs to her bare pussy and another wave of shaking hit her, her eyes rolling.
"If it's all safe baby... Could we... do you want to stay virgins?" I asked. Truth be told, I wasn't sure I could hold back any longer, my every fantasy but one coming true tonight. She looked up at me as her orgasm subsided and nodded, our eyes locking.
"Please Peter. I want to share that with you, I want it to be us together."
I didn't need any further invitation. I slid into her tight pussy and felt her shudder, my cock sleeved in her so deeply that it felt overwhelming. "Baby... I'm not gonna last very long," I whimpered,
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After a few more strokes, though, she slowed, looking up at me with her beautiful eyes, a shy frown on her face. "Peter... will you show me what to do? I haven't..."
She smiled in a somewhat embarrassed way.
Do you want me to make you cum, the way you made me?"
I gulped, nodding while I slid my hand down between her legs again as she grinned up at me. "But, I should tell you that I have a pretty long... well, if I cum, it'll probably mean it'll take me a long time to be able to cum again."
She frowned. "Well hmm... maybe
A sudden surge of tension relieved the pleasurable pressure as a fear flitted across my mind. I wasn't wearing a condom, and she'd already rubbed her soaked panties all over my cock.
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Epilogue:
Elise didn't get pregnant that night. It was probably for the best that she didn't. We both headed off to the nearby state college the next year, and I'm sure we made both our roommates miserable by spending close to every second at one of our dorms. We got more and more adventurous, trying all sorts of other things--maybe I'll share some other encounters with you. I even managed to use a condom sometimes, although we both had a pretty hard time, with one or the other of us usually begging the other to just pretty-please, skip it just this once. It wasn't much of a surprise when she finally did miss her period halfway through senior year. And then a second one. At that point, we threw the box out entirely. But that's another story. Elise and I graduated and the photos of us kissing at graduation, her tummy just beginning to grow large with our first daughter, hang on the wall of our home now. I still look back on that first night fondly. And sometimes, just to mix it up, Elise and I still pretend we've never done anything before, and that she wants me to put another load deep inside her like that first one. Well, can't say I blame her. Somehow, those orgasms seem to feel stronger, just like that first one did. I'll always remember it. There couldn't have been a better way to share my first time with her.

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I nodded, still grappling with everything that had just happened. "That was incredible.
She took
But Elise was finally settled on the ground, her eyes locked on mine. "I want you to tell me if I'm doing a good job, Peter. I haven't ever given a blowjob before, and your cock is so big I'm worried I'll have trouble fitting it."
I laughed lightly, letting my hand run along her neck, which elicted a shiver and a slow blink. "Just don't use your teeth and I'm sure you'll do great."
She nodded seriously, then slow
She moaned, sliding my cock between her breasts again. It felt incredible, better than I'd ever felt before, but I somehow held on, my cock twitching and spurting drops of precum all over her perfect, smooth breasts. She looked at me with those beautiful, begging eyes and whispered down to me. "Can I rub you between my legs baby? I think I could cum again, just from that, feeling your cock down there like when I touch myself..."
I nodded, slowly, taking a shuddering breath. "You can baby but you should be careful, shouldn't you? Is it safe to do that? It's feeling so good already for me, I worry it might make me cum too, and my precum is all over my cock."
She smiled. "Of course it's safe baby." She pressed her tits back down to my erect cock, smothering them and eliciting another wave of pleasure that surged through me, and then she proceeded to inch her way up my body, pressing my slippery, messy cock between her and me the whole way, until she came to a rest with a desperate moan atop my cock like she was grinding on a pillow. She stabilized herself, then started a few slow circular gyrations with her hips.
It was like being jerked off by a tsunami. Every pleasure sensor in my cock seemed to be going, and my breath became ragged. "Babe, you're gonna make me cum," I whispered, but suddenly she lifted off me, the pleasure temporarily subsiding, and her own orgasm from grinding on me took her. She tumbled backwards onto the bed, body shaking, moaning and covered in my precum. I shifted to the side of the bed and slid a finger up her thighs to her bare pussy and another wave of shaking hit her, her eyes rolling.
"If it's all safe baby... Could we... do you want to stay virgins?" I asked. Truth be told, I wasn't sure I could hold back any longer, my every fantasy but one coming true tonight. She looked up at me as her orgasm subsided and nodded, our eyes locking.
"Please Peter. I want to share that with you, I want it to be us together."
I didn't need any further invitation. I slid into her tight pussy and felt her shudder, my cock sleeved in her so deeply that it felt overwhelming. "Baby... I'm not gonna last very long," I whimpered,
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After a few more strokes, though, she slowed, looking up at me with her beautiful eyes, a shy frown on her face. "Peter... will you show me what to do? I haven't..."
She smiled in a somewhat embarrassed way.
Do you want me to make you cum, the way you made me?"
I gulped, nodding while I slid my hand down between her legs again as she grinned up at me. "But, I should tell you that I have a pretty long... well, if I cum, it'll probably mean it'll take me a long time to be able to cum again."
She frowned. "Well hmm... maybe
A sudden surge of tension relieved the pleasurable pressure as a fear flitted across my mind. I wasn't wearing a condom, and she'd already rubbed her soaked panties all over my cock.